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Monday 21 May 2012
Pine
footing long and straight
Protecting all around us
slot pine Minder for ever !!
oh ,In snowfall looks like cone
waiting for bounce ,
pine stands tall as ever !!
with Skinny leaves in green color
pine tree with long neck
spreading Stink in the air !!
few lines from heart for : Haiku-heights
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5 Smiles ...:):
great work there
I would think pines smell nice ~ Smiles ~
This is good but the poetry form is not haiku ~
Hope you don't mind the critique ~
@tarun : thanks dear ..
@Grace : hey Thanks grace .. yes definitely .i w'll try to do best ..
Good lines Anu,.have a suggestion- do post the description of the haiku, it's always great to the poet insights :)
Nice lines....light and good :-)
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